Wind Kisses

By blaise25

the wind kisses me

at the beach you walk by

still moonlight

our time

yet the breeze only one

the C moon smiles

I feel like singing

tonight

the star stole my wish

still moonlight

our time

yet the sand at your feet

sprinkled in the air

reaches your collarbone

the C moon smiles at me

may the wind

bring my kiss

as I sing you this song…

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nighthag Level 4 Commenter 14 months ago

lovely word play, a beautiful poem

Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 14 months ago

A beautiful moonlit verse.;)When the sun peaks over the horizon I'll be by to share a cup of coffee with you Fehl.;)

Randy Behavior Level 2 Commenter 14 months ago

Nice Blaise. There is a name for this style right? I think AIDY used to do these.

Dim Flaxenwick Level 7 Commenter 14 months ago

Beautiful. Now I can´t get that old Paul McCartney song out of my head, C moon, C moon La La La

always exploring Level 8 Commenter 14 months ago

The star stole my wish, very beautiful !! The song,' You first believed is perfect for this piece. Thank you.

aware Level 2 Commenter 14 months ago

sweet .

ray

Cheeky Girl Level 4 Commenter 14 months ago

Aww, this is a lovely poem, Fehl. Some lucky person's getting those kisses. LOL! Sand and air, sounds like some nice beach somewhere warm and exotic. I can feel myself almost drifting away.... :) Lovely!

acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

This is so lovely, simply beautiful. I loved the song and what a perfect choice. Voting up and pressing those tabs.

blaise25 Hub Author 13 months ago

Thanks Nighthag! :D

Would be glad to have a cup of coffee with you Prof A :) Thank you.

Hi Randy! Yup but I don't know how they call it LOL If you remember, tell me OK AIDY? Am I dead yet?

Hi Dim! Wow I'll check that song out now :)

Hi AE! Yup, I love the song that I didn't polish the poem so much. I wanted the readers to focus more on the song LOL I was emphasizing it ;)Glad you hit the play button like Dim. It's so beautiful! Thanks AE! :)

Thanks Aware!

Hi Cassy! I wanted to be the wind so I could kiss that damn lucky person :)

Acaetnna hi! Glad you loved the song and the poetry. ^,^ Thanks!

Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

Beautiful image, wind kisses. Very nice. Anything near a beach with sand is a winner for me, and a C moon for company too. The wind can always be kissing us. The power of your imagination is cool, Fehl. It reads like a night full of expectations... Groovy poetry as always. :) XO

blaise25 Hub Author 13 months ago

The power of my imagination is insane. LOL Me..loves her like crazy. XOXO

4elements 13 months ago

I liked it. But I tend to like all things involving the moon

Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

That imagination is inspiring and vast.....we can lassoo the moon with it and pull it down to us and change it's light bulbs. Heh. XOXO

blaise25 Hub Author 13 months ago

The moon makes the night sexier :) Thanks 4elements!

The moon has some gravity that pulls us closer. Your imagination is always lovely Princess Astra :) XO

Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

Um, that gravity is so cool, don't you think? :) And yes, some things and some people bring out the best in me. Have a nice weekend, Fehl. XO

blaise25 Hub Author 13 months ago

Yeah it is :) I always lassoo the moon when I see it haha You're quite inspired it's pretty clear :) Thanks! Have a great one. My weekend was over. We went to the movie house and watched The Roommate. XO

Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

I know exactly how that feels, when someone brings out things in me I am scared to say at times. Oh Roommate, is it good? It's a Chick flick, right? I got a DVD "The Expendables" on the way home from work. I walked in, and on the table was another DVD, Cassy had got "Despicable Me" for us to watch on the TV. I love telepathy. Hehehe. We're having a mini-summer spring here. Weather was nice and warm. Enjoy your week, Fehl, don't work too hard. :) XO

blaise25 Hub Author 13 months ago

Hmm yeah I'm like that sometimes, too. But I usually end up saying it anyway LOL Oh yeah! It's soOo good! It's Minka Kelly and Leighton Meester :) I want another round of them actually LOL Definitely will buy the dvd when it's available ;) Mini-summer sounds fun. Super summer has officially started two days ago here. Freaking hot! Enjoy and TC :) Mwah!

epigramman 13 months ago

..well I gotta 'study' how the master does it - and then I will go outside - look at my moon over the lake - and sigh - contently!

lionel1 Level 1 Commenter 12 months ago

Beautiful hub thank you very much, it was really appreciated.

spotlight19 Level 1 Commenter 12 months ago

beautiful poem hub you wrote i have a question how do u get the copyright symbol on your writing work? im just curious about that.

Thanks! have a good day

blaise25 Hub Author 12 months ago

Thank you sweet Epigramman :) Your works are amazing!

Happy to see you lionel :)

Hello Spotlight! Ah I typed the symbol from Microsoft Word and just pasted it here. :) Go to 'Word' and click 'Insert' and go over the 'Symbol' and find the Copyright symbol. Let me know if you got it OK :) Thanks for dropping by :)