Whoever You Are
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Whoever you are
Please bump into me now
Or tomorrow or next week
Coz I’m tired of waiting
Falling and breaking
Whoever you are
Can you please hurry
Don’t know anymore
If I could endure this
Every night just gets colder
Whoever you are
Please say your name
Unravel yourself now
Coz I’m tired of writing
The wrong ones, erasing
Whoever you are
Please don’t scare me
Was weak to fear
Vulnerable always been
When I push away please stay
Whoever you are
Please don’t believe me
When I say you kill me
I breathe the air
You breathe
Whoever you are
Please don't listen
When you hear my heartbeat
It isn't enough
Every part of me wants your every part
Whoever you are
Please don’t be too kind
Don’t love me much either
If I find you do
Whoever you are
A bad girl like me…
Wouldn't deserve
a good guy like you...
© 2010-Jan. b l a i s e
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such torture coming through... you've just summed up exactly how I feel...
O blaise that was gorgeous. I'm sure you are worth more than you think you are.. Not everyone can use words to such beauty, the way you do, bless you
@advisor4qb
glad to see you here again. Thanks for liking it! :)
@RDB
what do you feel exactly? did you write a hub bout it? gotta read yours tonight.. THANKS for reading and commenting! :)
@Dim
Hi, Dim! Your comments make me smile as always, thank you! :) I don't realize my worth sometimes unfortunately.. :c God bless..
Oh Blaise, you rock us with your love and then "not too much". You are deserving of an intense love. Where is it? Thanks
who is whoever you are?
This is a great poem and "wherever you are" (HP included)you deserve much praise for writing it. Thank you
@Micky
hey, Mik! Thank you. Everyone deserves it but not every time.. Hope it's halfway.. :)
@Poet
glad to see you :) someone who'd be crazy in love with whoever I am. Hey, 'whoever you are' who are you? lol
@Petra Vlah
thanks for the praise! :) nice to see you
Great poem! I remember being at that same place, at times in my life. Just wish when a person is there, it wouldn't hurt so much:( Great Hub! So good to put your feelings down on paper:) Don't give up, keep looking up! The right one will come along:)
Excellent poem! I am making my rounds on reading-between working-so glad that I did! I will be back....:)
@heart4theword
Thanks a lot, I admire your insights as always :)
@GhostWhisper
cool, reading-between-working ;) Thank you, see you around!
A very good poem. Thanks for it and also for following me.
thanks Cupid51! :)
Wow... nice work.. a very strong poem!
Nice poem. Sounds as though it was straight from the heart. Though, I hope when 'whoever you are' arrives they are met by someone whom knows they deserve the greatest love, regard, and magical feeling. You deserve it, I deserve it... we all deserve it..But, I don't it arrives until we, know within ouselves that we deserve it..I'm ready.. :)
ps. ~ The bad girl line may actually attract 'whoever ever' .... 'who knows'? LOL
I liked this Hub. You are a good writer, and your feelings are there. I hope you find what you are looking for. You deserve it.
@CM
Thanks a bunch for always stopping by and commenting :)
@Invictus
Ah, just a lonely and empty moment made me scribble those words…Everyone deserves it :) The bad girl line? LOL hope it wouldn’t define ‘mean’ as it may sound. Hehe As I’ve said, I felt lonely and empty while writing it, that I ended up excruciating myself…
Thanks, Invictus! Your words speak a lot of lessons :)
@Cheeky
Thank you for the lovely comment and hope :) I’m not looking for something, I’m just missing something…
Completely blew me away.What an ending.
^_^ what can I say I love putting twists :p
Thanks DH!
I LOVE IT, REALLY ENJOY VISITING YOUR SPACE, THANKS...
You sparkle in these lines...
@KR
thank you for always visiting.. :)
@cheeky
thanks for the shining comment :)
So deeply felt - I can relate to it...
There's nothing a nice guy responds more to than a bad girl...
hell yea sometimes LOL thanks Mentalist acer!
Quite sublime. You write in a way that moves and transforms. I envy your talent, blaise25.
Hi Cath! You always flatter me girl :) Thanks so much! XO
You are very talented when putting down how you feel,but your under this illusion that your not worth much,everyone is worth more than they realize,i do hope you'll realize.
That's a great compliment, thanks Alya rose :)
advisor4qb 2 years ago
Love it!