When You're Gone
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When you’re gone
I won’t be scared anymore
When you’re gone
I won’t be so sad anymore
When you’re gone
I won’t be crying my tears
When you’re gone
I won’t be missing you
When you’re gone
I won’t be hurting again
When you’re gone
I won’t kiss you goodbye
When you’re gone
I won’t search you anywhere
When you’re gone
I won’t be losing myself
When you’re gone
I won’t date someone else
When you’re gone
I won’t love again
‘Cause you know why?
When you’re gone,
I disappear, too…
I am gone…
I am gone with you.
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© Copyright 2009-December by Fehl Dungo
All Rights Reserved
This poem is included in the book, Toss and Turn
by Fehl Dungo
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thanks Invictus :p
yah, the image is perfect for the hidden message..two red lights..I wonder if someone would unfold it lol
haha, I read you well! lol :D
yeah all the time lol
this time, didn't hear your insights :p
I'm biting my tongue for now.. feel a bit naked from the blue flame.. ;p maybe soon..lol
ah the crystal blue, enjoyed it ;p
Isn't it sad when we get so lost in someone else that we lose our own identity?!!!! I can so relate!
What an intriguing poem, I have a feeling the obvious meaning is not the main message, hope you reveal it as I am most curious. Thanks for getting me to think!
Jen
fantastic.
I think you love somebody! Thanks for the hub!
you do love somebody, please tell
shhhh... I think the lights turned green... you could get run over in the collision...LOL
after all who see's red when in a cloud of green. ;p
I adore this! I knew there was gonna be something special at the end.. an I couldn't read fast enough to get there! lol... really cool read.. Loved it :)
A heartwarming tribute to someone. I loved it, please more.
-advisor4qb
I get what you mean. The poem actually would mean various of things, just depends on the reader..her situation I think, or experience. Yeah, we get so lost sometimes..becoz life’s a journey. For me, (im not talking bout everyone in general) when you lose yourself, it’s time to stop..what’s for you?
Thank you!:)
-Jen’s solitude
Nice meetin you! Thank you! :) You know what, I knew this poem would be really intriguing…
You’re absolutely right. Just like the photo, two red lights..It means the otherwise..”a Go” it means an escape…two persons gone…I wanna disappear with someone :)
-Kristie
Thank you! Nice meetin you :)
-Micky and Poet
Thank you both! Glad to see you here..Yah, I do love somebody, who doesn’t? lol Happy New Year guys! :)
-Invictus
Oh wow, what can I say? You unfolded it! :) I guess a swim from the blue refreshed your mind lol a cloud of green? lol I guess we are leading to a rainbow…lol thank you, Invictus!
-pbwriterchick
Thanks! :) glad you like it. I wonder how may times did you read it to get what it means..lol
-fastfreta
Thank you! :) God bless..
Thanks... this is a very lovely verse.
thanks a lot CM! :)
nyc work :)
Beautiful and true.
A strange phenomenon to lose yourself in another.
thanks Umna, nice to see you :)
Hi DH! I know this one's crazy strange and very intriguing..
thank you! :)
Love your poetry. Well done!
thank you for the comments LizzyBoo! :) TC
IT'S GOOD TO SEE SO MUCH LOVE FLOWING, THANKS, IT LIFTS MY SPIRITS...
I see you have so much love flowing and lifting..it's the way you see the poem :) thank you! TC
Outstanding, This is felt in my heart. When one can touch a readers heart, its believed that one has succeded! Keep up the good work!
I'm glad it has struck some hearts..it's a writer's joy :) Thanks a lot!
That was beautiful. I've been married over 40 years and I know your poem describes exactly how I'd feel if my husband was 'gone'. thanks
Beautiful, what irony. You won't miss the person when they're gone, because you miss them even when they are there. It's kind of like, damned if you do, damned if you don't. I feel a whole lot of us have been in situations like these. You communicate it wonderfully.
Wow, 40 years, that's so great to hear. You really are meant to be :) It's interesting to hear people's comments as a glimpse of their story and life. Thank you, Dim!
Hello there, Brands! I'm liking this style of poetry, intriguing and left out in the open...coz it's really so interesting hearing comments, which speak a lot bout a person's situation and experience. :p
Yup, you're so damned right :) You would always miss someone, there or gone. I think it wont be magical if you wont. But everyone hates missing someone who's gone. But there's a beautiful thing bout missing someone...it's missing someone who's missing you, too! :)
Thank you! :)
Why can't we always get back every bit of what we give though? It would make life so much more certain,and less scary.
We never will..everything is just so uncertain. Pain is always there, I dunno too the reasons why...maybe someday all else is gonna make sense.
i feel you dear one..too bad love and pain always comes with the package..but i hope u have made a lot of "moving on" kind of poems after this one
cool pen name, lipstick! :) i've made few moving on stuffs but they weren't poems..thank you!
they are lovely poems for me Blaise (^_^)
the "moving on" stuffs? lol anyway, thanks for the nice comments :)
I AM SO HAPPY, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR JOURNEY WITH OUR READERS, ALWAYS A PLEASURE, DON'T BE A STRANGER...
This is so beautiful, Blaise. It perfectly described how you love somebody. Painful but honest yet you obviously are hiding something. I'll be back to read again :)
thank you kissesNpen :)
I know this poem is so intriguing but your statements intrigued me more lol Yes, there's hidden in there. I put it that way but someone who I love knows what it means.. :) well, I hope so.
You are so daring here, very well written...
always been fearless to write eheh..it's deeper than you think though..
thank you Moulik!
I just noticed that a comment I left here didn't appear. Anyway, this is just beautiful, Fehl. It sounds like a lovely tribute to a long distance relationship that will last the test of whatever life throws at it. Love is strong and survives lots of things. I really love this poem. It flows so easy as a river gurgling along, your poetry always finds its own level, just like a water.
I hope this comment sticks now. Ha. Take care, Fehl. :) x
Hi Cath! I missed you! Hmm you left a comment but never seen anything, well that's weird. Was your comment gone with the poem? LOL Anyway, hope this one appears. Ooohh, long distance relationship..now you read me. Are you kinda my reincarnation or something? :) Ha, it's glued here now ;) TC XO
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That song is my favorite and it's what comes up to mind when I'm depressed.
Did you mean from Stumbleupon? Thanks for sharing that beautiful song. It sure would lift a heart ;)
I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago
Lovely poem and the image is so surreal! :)