Toss and Turn
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I don't regret any days I spent,
nights we shared,
or letters that I sent
It's 4:03 and I can't sleep
without you next to me
I toss and turn like the sea
if I drown tonight,
bring me back to life…
Breathe your breath in me
the only thing that I still believe in
is you, if you only knew…
--If You Only Knew by Shinedown
The stupid o’clock has never been my best friend, the more I try not to mind it, the more it annoys me. I toss and turn for the nth time but I can’t fuckin fall asleep. Every time I close my eyes, all I see is your baby face. Blah..I’ve been here before…and I wont lie again I’ve been wishing for you.
If I could just cancel my thoughts right now...
Wonders what you’re doing tonight. Are you thinking bout me…Do you somehow hear some voices calling out my name…Maybe I could sleep knowin I crossed your mind. Maybe, baby…
I just can’t close my eyes, coz I’ll see you…then I can’t fight myself to kiss you…and then another trance…
drown me
with your lips
so soft
I don’t really care
if I suffocate…
touch you
touch me
want you
want me
break me
break you
let’s just break
each other…
what we have
has no
label…
I’m in love
with you
look into
my eyes
can you see it
still?
I love you
so much
that
you don’t
understand…
I don’t think
it’s gonna
end…
I used to be selfish…I am my main priority until you came along…and yeah, things have changed when we kissed….
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awesome
very creative
and moving
thank you
kimberly
Thank you EM ;)
Hello Lyrics! :) That's a sexy avatar
Inspired and really good work!!!
great job with projecting emotions.. wish I could feel things like that again...
Hello CM :) Always good to see you.
Jen - Thank you. Of course you can again, believe me :)
Very nice =]
fragilexair, thank you :)
Oh the torture of love and the waiting for love to come back and tell you its real. When that feeling hits, and you need to know - but wait for it - it's all biting nails and fiddling with hair and sleepless nights. You are really there, Blaise. I hope it happens for you. Great poetry and you say it stylishly. But don't fight the feeling. It will always win you anyway. :)
Hi Cathy:) Ow, you've been there..coz you know exactly how it is :) It's so good to read your comments moi friend. Feels like a good talk in a coffee break. Yep, can't always fight the feelings.. :) Thanks. Say hi to CG :)
It's sometimes easy to forget the pangs love can bring while in an illuminated gooey spin :) maybe getting all knotted and twisted up is a sign of the depth? hmm, lovely and moving.
Yep twisted like a hurricane, I dunno how deep I'd fall more...
Thanks, dear Invictus :)
Being in love is wonderful and horrendous at the same time. It amazes me how any of us survive it.................... but we do. bless you x
Yep yep. No matter how much it sucks, we always love it.... Bless you, Dim :)
Do you find this resonates with a younger you, or simply an every day you? I think it feels different the older you get...lol.
I'm right here Baby! I'm right here!
Doesn't resonate any other time at all. I mean, there's always a difference. Just like morrow's music would feel different when played the next day. I hardly notice time at all in love. I think you would if you started feeling older. Besides, who cares bout anything else when you spin... =)
Micky Dee, thanks for being here ;) You are one talented sweet guy!
this is painful even to read, like it
thanks Joy56 :)
pretty good writing here so much imotion and expression poured out. I like it. ~aloha~
thanks a lot Sa'ge :)
I love this poetry and the whole hub in fact. We all want to be loved. We want that special person to see us as we are, and use that telepathy. See what we are thinking and feeling. We're all human! Best wishes to you, Blaise! Have a great weekend! : )
Thanks moi friend. :) Love, love, love it's so good to be in it. Happy weekend!
Love, torment, pain and his her twisted game. Very interested hub blaise25. Well enjoyed
thanks Deepthought :)
Came back for another read of this magical poem. Couldn´t help laughing at Micky´s comment. He´s a star, isn´t he? So, So enjoyed reading this again. Thank you.
God bless x
haha yeah, Micky's a sweet man and so talented :) Thanks for coming back here,Dim. Always good to see you
I like your poems, what I have read anyway, and I would like to read your book. I love poetry. I like Mirabai or Sappho. More unrequited love. Your poems are very passionate though.
Teresa
Hello Teresa! :) Thanks for visiting. Mirabai and Sappho, sound so interesting. Looking forward to read one day.. I'd be happy if you read my other writings in here and hear your feedback. You have all the time and it's free ;) And if you like to grab a copy of my book, it's on this link:
http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/toss-and-tur
Thanks and God bless :)
Enigmatic Me 2 years ago
the tortured soul of unrequieted love.... well described...