Take it Back
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Just take it back
the taste of your lips
how it sweetens me up
when the spices pour in
coz baby I finally
made up my mind
to be untangled in you
me knows it’s so hard
it’s freaking so hard
coz every time I run away
my heart comes closer back at you
so baby, take it all back
the scent of your skin
how it lingers underneath
addicting me deep within
why can’t I just miss missing you
like at this moment
me trying a poem
or perhaps a song
I can’t help it
I know I should get you off my mind
coz baby I finally
made up my mind
to be untangled in you
can I just take it all back
what I said…
coz me knows it’s so hard
it’s freaking so hard
coz every time I run away
my heart comes closer back at you
**one boring day waiting for someone who’s obviously fallen asleep…Grrrrrrrrr
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Ah, so sweet, blaise! :) Is it untangled or tangled? either way, eh? LOL
@CM - Hey! Thanks for the sweet comments :) Take it back..um and then not..haha
@Invictus - Thank you! Untangled at first then I wanted to take it back, what I said..hahah..I changed the video and song. My mood has changed and this one was my original pick for this..a good mash up ;) Sorry to kinda tangle your mind LOL
I love that loving expression! Thank you blaise for presenting such a beautiful poem.
That was so , so lovely . Reminded me of a card I got for my husband years ago,. It said....OK , so I'm in love with you, and when I get hold of that cupid I'm going to break his fat little legs !!!! Love all your work. Thanks for sharing.
I like the untangle bit, it has multiple meanings. We can get caught up in the love, get caught up in the person, caught up in so many strands of their personality that we do need untangling from time to time, if only to catch our breath or get our bearings. When someone is on my mind I simply find myself going to them.
I used to never find love when I needed it.
Stupid me - I stopped looking for it and practically tripped over it. What does that tell you?
Great hub, as usual from you, Blaise. Bravo.
nice poem, a change of mind is good
Blaise,
This was really beautiful and touched me so deeply. Your poetry says so much about whats inside.
warmest regards,
Chris
My high school sweetheart wore a very distinct smelling body spray. I don't know the name of the scent but occasionally I'll smell it and it reminds me of her. This poem reminded me of that.
@Cupid - Thanks dear cupid! :)
@Dim - your husband is so sweet. You look so good together, Dim :) That cupid hit the perfect match I guess ;) Hey, you noticed there was another cupid before you in there? LOL
Thanks a lot for the wonderful comments. They boost me more to write ;)
@Astra Nomik - Hey, Cath! Yep, tangled up and untangled in..You're one of a kind gem. I like your insights, sometimes I read 'em and I see inside of me. And with this one, you kinda unfolded it. ;)
Hahaha hell yea! It will trip you over and you'll fall hard enough if you ignore it. Say hi to CG :)
Thanks a lot moi friend!
@Poet - I'm always glad to see you :) Yea it is sometimes ;) Thanks!
@Cris - Hi! How are you? Really?! I was not serious publishing it but anyway hit the button. ;) It always says what's inside..
I'm glad it touched you deeply. Thank you, Chris! TC
@Jared - nice meeting you. Ow, she must be someone really special ;) Thank you!
untangling is one of the hardest things ever.
Yes it is, Justine. Can you teach me how? Coz the more I untangle, the more I get tied up..LOL
Sounds like a pop song. I enjoyed the way you wrote this. Much different from most other things I've read on here. Good job! : )
yeah, I like this song better.. I like Rihanna.
@Becca - nice meeting you! :) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot! :)
@Invictus - Hey! I so love your avatar though not quite sure what it is ;) hmm heavenly body? love the blue! :)
I like Riri, too. She rocks! hmmm, I'll try singing this one for you... ;)
Hmm, interesting song.. wonder why you would want to sing it for me? Love is a 2 way street and it seems, I've been driving on a 1 way path...
I guess people can make what thet want from the avatar.. Glad you like it.. the image is soothing to me :)
hahaha coz you make me smile when you share some songs. But this one I'm sharing, one of my faves from Riri..to rock Invictus ;)
Yup, it is a 2-way..where are ya going? I'm here if you want someone to talk to...though my mind is nowhere lately LOL
Yup very soothing :) Hmmm is that a pendulum? OK I'll stop guessing hahaha
i take it back ;)
great poem blaise!
teach me how.. ;)
thanks Pixie!
Blaise, I have no idea, Im so tangled, that every time I try to undo the knots something breaks....
All I can say is eventualy, somehow or other, it does come undone.
Haha, blaise! :) Hmm. about the avatar..your guess is my guess... LOL
Okay, I guess you can sing to me then. thanks for sharing.
@Justine - something always breaks..yup, perhaps sooner or later it'll turn to what it's supposed to be.
@Invictus - really? Wow, we have d same guess! That thing is hypnotizing.. :)
Welcome! u spoil me with songs, I'll spoil u! :)
I loved its sing-song voice, very well done...
thank you MOulik ;)
I made up my mind - but there she is in that video!
Hahahaha yeah she sings for you, Mik ;)
I like your poetry. Especially the line untangled up in you. I like the way you turn a phrase.
Namaste.
Heya DD nice meetin you! :) Thanks.
Namaste
"one boring day waiting for someone who’s obviously fallen asleep…Grrrrrrrrr"
Hahaha... Just like someone I know.
Lovely poem, Blaise. Like always. :)
Oh yeah? Whoooo? hahahah
THANKS! Nice to see you Freya :)
A boring day made you write so beautiful lines.. brilliant writer indeed !
Blaise got this kind of pic then hubpages told me to revise it..how is it in you ?
hi Angel. Wow thank you for saying that. You are a brilliant writer yourself :) You got this kind of pic? Those sexy feet? Got mine from Tumblr. Sometimes the pixels thingy make that revise warning.. Oh I wanna read that poem now you are putting that pic on.. :)
Hi Blaise .it's no longer there ! HP told me to revise it ...so i delete that pic..so now they disable the ads..see there , title is tempting night , it's a haiku only.Thanks.
I read your Tempting Night. It's so seductive and tempting. You even got HP's attention hehehe I hope they retained the pic coz it suits the Haiku..word for word..line by line :) Have you contacted HP about the warning? I got few of those before too but I always explained about the hub involved..
Oh we can air our grievances ? thought we can't..thanks for telling me Blaise..
Yeah we can contact Hubpages Team if we feel like there is a mistake regarding the hub.. You're welcome, my friend :)
carolina muscle Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago
Take it back? ... Oh is this a sweet poem!!