Smother Me
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I ask your lips to marry mine
Be with me all the time
You
look
at
me
our souls
already
entwined
The way you moved last night
I
cant
forget
fire of current
raging
all
my
veins
My hands
itch
to
rip off
your
clothes
but
you’re
bare
already
out
of
lingerie
I ask your lips to marry mine
Be with me all the time
Undeniably
you
are
the one
for
me
Your soft voice
humming in my ears
like
a
rolling
thunder
chasing
the
sexy
wind
I
can’t move
babe,
I
can’t move
Smother me
I
want
to
taste
your salty lips...
Brown colored iris
your
heart
belongs
to me
Fingertips explore
my
secret
sea
I
moan
your
name…
softly
like
the mad
wave
kissing
back the
C
© Copyright 2012 by Fehl Dungo
To my Sexy Otter, Cathy Nerujen
^_^
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Awesome write, Blaise! Very sexy and the longing intense! Loved it :)
Beautiful! I loved the letter C for the word sea. Awesome..Thank you..Cheers
Very intense. Great photos too. Did I say intense? They don't have a "I need a cold shower" button so, guess I'll go with awesome.
Wow, that was awesome. As previously stated, it was intense.
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Loved it!
Sexy Otter will be a happy otter,and thus a happy blaise.
Hello Writer20. Thank you for being the first here :) hahaha I think I’ve just started lol I’m glad you guys loved it. Thanks for the votes too. You rock.
Hi there Pb! I am waiting for your next poem..I miss your words but I’m so happy to see you here. :) Thank you.
Hi Ruby :) Oh you are beautiful. I kinda changed the C thing to draw more meanings..and yes it rhymes and they match :) Always glad to see you. Cheers! Thank you.
Cre8tor wow yeah the photos were hard to find but worth it :) Oh yeah you said intense twice and I believe that so much lol Thank you.
Hi echoe0021 wow you’re a double 00. Thank you for the awesome comment.
I’m so happy you loved it Samantha. Nice to meet you here. :)
Hello Alastar. Sexy otter is surfing into the blue right now and will be surprised to find this. :) Happy you dropped by and read my new hub. Thank you.
Hy baby.... Sexy Otter swims up to you and swims with you... hehehe... This is the most beautiful and candid poem you ever wrote... and yes now I really am floating... LOL. Oh Fehl, what a beautiful Hub Page. Brimming with love and sexy images. Mwaaaaaaaaahh. Yes, I want to smother you in kisses. Okay I am saying that here, please don't faint. :P
Even the humming... oh Fehl, this is just so beautiful. Thank you for this gorgeous poem....
I love you so much. :)
Hi babe.. I love it when you float like that..LOL Oh thank you for loving this. *kisses you back* Oh I wont faint. I am an otter..your Otter :) I love you lots :)
Mmmhhh.... oh wow... the telepathy is so strong here in this... I just melt when I am with you, baby... *Kisses your nose* Hehehe... :)
Mmmmmmhh...either you melt or roll like an ice cube, I'd take you in.. *pinches your nose* :)
Hehehe... ice cubes... oh straight out of my head you pluck these thoughts... I wonder how you are doing that, honey? Remember the other place I melted it? LOL (Hint, it was not your nose...)
How am I doing that? I just know what's on your mind when I logged in to your 2 strong wifi routers.. LOL No no it wasn't on my nose... ^_^
H'mm... you are magic... and that wifi signal is so strong... hehehe... routers... LOL. Oh Fehl, that is so funny. :)
yeah LOL Oh I'm so hungry. I'm craving for cheesecake and muffins. Wanna go eat with me, Sweety? :)
Um... yes, sounds tasty, Fehl.... lets go.... :)
Treat me for coffee :)
Yes, my treat in appreciation for your poetic endeavors and delectation. :) I know a certain Mocha Latte ...
I love these moments, very electric and addictive.
Ooh so completely sexy - oh what a treat! Awesome in every way - what a treat!!!
This is awesomely sexy to the very last drop like a cool milkshake! LOL! Dang! Fehl, you are amazing - I think this is the best you have written so far! "Kissing back the C" has several possible connotations to moi ears! :D Fehl, you are very inspired! Passion bursts out of every word! I think Miss Mocha Latte will be putting an extra few sugars in her coffee today! XOX
And I love the Otter bit too! :)
Funny, I am having coffee right now... :)
A beautiful sensual poem that sizzles off the screen,
A fantastic read that heats the blood with each passing word.
Hi Cathy. Wow, thank you for the coffee treat. Hmm I know a certain Mocha Latte too.. :) hmm I remember the last time I had it. A volcano suddenly erupted..
Hello Augustine. Oh you are one romantic man. I know you love those moments. Your hubs are so electric. :) Thank you for reading.
Hi Acaetnna. Girl you are so in love. Thank you for visiting. :)
Hi there Curly Cassy. Wow, to the very last drop of a yummy milkshake. I guess you want another one? Hehehe Thank you Curly. You are so amazing. Yeah the “kissing back the C” is my favorite part here actually. It expresses a lot of meanings. I need more rounds of milkshake to spill it LOL Miss Mocha Latte inspire me so much. She is my hubs. :) XOXO
Take care of my Otter :)
Hi again, baby. Coffee right now? Please don’t put too much sugar ok. :) Mwaaaah!
Hello Nighthag. You always say the most beautiful comments. I’m glad you felt that way. Thank you so much.
This was so amazing Blaise. Love the words, love the pics, love how you wrote it line by line. Awesome and so passionate.
I'm a long time watcher of your posts, and one good and beautiful day I'm going to express my true feelings and appreciation of your amazing Hub posts.
Oh wow, that volcano...um... hehehe. :)
Only sugar I want is right here. You are so sweet. :)
Thank you Caroline :) It just flows along... :)
Hello Lionel. Yes I know you're one of my usual visitors who really read my hubs and I'm so thankful for that. :) I guess if I wont find you to any of my new hubs, I would be worried coz Blaise has grown to your presence :) Thank you so much.
Hi, Cathy. :) Volcano is silent now..I know if I crossed that curve line again..I um..could wake it up.. hehehe :)
I will be your sugar and cream ;) Mwaaaahhh..
Beautiful, sexy, chilling poem. A couple lines I believe were from a song, and you kind of made them your own. Changed em around, added words.."Like a rolling thunder chasing...the wind." Really good song too by the way. Loved this poem :)
Hello Nikki :) I wasn't thinking any song except someone's hum LOL If I explained the rolling thunder part, you'd go crazy LOL Thank you. Always glad when you visit. :)
This is a link to the song here.. Lightning Crashes by Live http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsJ4O-nSveg&ob=av3e
Great song. Haha and I can only imagine what you mean by the rolling thunder part. ;)
Damn that song gave me goosebumps thank you for sharing. I loved it. It's so powerful. My rolling thunder was a mix feeling of climax, love and longing. Do you remember that baseball scene from Twilight? Supermassive Blackhole was playing and the ball strikes when thunder rolls chasing the wind. I was feeling like that but more wild and electric
Nice! Glad you liked it. and that must have been one amazing feeling..Hmm...Orgasmic, out of this world.
Snap. :) I loved that song too. That was intense and I felt every vibe. Waking that volcano can be so nice.... :)
Okay I better not say too much. Hehehe.... :)
Oh wow that rolling thunder... *Puts a gag over my mouth to shut myself up* LOL. :)
haha astra you are Bad! lol
Yes Nikki it is the most amazing feeling in the world. hehe
Oh Cathy we are so bad, babe. Should we not talk about Volcano here? heheheh Mwaaaaahhh. Thunder, volcano, lightning.. oh wow, save me for a lava cream will you? :p
Yes Nikki I am so spankable for saying that. LOL. The volcano thing we keep the lid on it. Heh. Oh Fehl, we are so funny. Lava ice cream.... mmmhhhh... sounds very nice... ;) You are so teasing now. :P
you are spankable even if you wont say anything lol Hmmm what would you do if I'm so teasing now? :p
Hehehe.... I better not say here... LOL. If you tease me more, I will have to um.... *whispers in your ear*
smother me...
Exactly..... but in a very nice romantic way.... :)
^_^ mwaaaaaahhh.... :)
You are telepathic, Fehl... Mwaaaaaaaaaahhh. ^_^
you are Astranomical ^_^ mwaaaaaaaaaahhhhh...
Oh you two are unbelievable. Such intense mutual love. Beautiful poem, though I must admit I also got lost in the comments. Whew!
Oops. :) Dim, you are correct. We should get a room. LOL.
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Mwaaah. I love the flower. :)
mwaaaah. I love you :)
Oh Fehl... I love you too. :)
^_^ *kisses your soft sexy lips*
I'm glad you love the new romantic poem on my Hubs I wrote for you....
Oh wow.... I want to melt now.... :) ^,^
Anything that is YOU, I love it... Mwaaaaahhh.. ^,^
Well that was awesome entertainment! Not just the beautiful poetry, but the comment thread as well. Really great Fehl, I especially loved the ending as well.
Wish you could see your score now baby, it's "69". LOL ;)
Oh wow, I am so red now.. I'm glad you loved the poetry and um the comments :D Thank you Sharyn :) xx
OMG even my score is going in that direction.. LOL You have that magnet, baby. :)
So have you, Fehl. You are a traffic magnet and you magnetized even me.... :) XOXOX
I only want you... :) xoxoxoxo
You have me now. :) xoxoxoxoxoxox I love you Fehl :)
mmmmmmmhhhhh.. I love you, too :)
Why is my score 69 again? LOL
I will whisper it to you.... gently...over breakfast.... Hehehe... XOXOX :)
mmmmmmhhhh..... when you whisper something to me, I...
xoxoxo :)
Hehehe.... you told me today... I know, Fehl... xoxoxo
baby.... :D
xoxoxox
*kisses your neck*
now im a fan of ur writings. :) and it was so hot in here :D
Wow thank you so much Mitch :) Cool down, have a Magnum ice cream :)
The intense passion overwhelms me.
Sensual, passionate, full of deep desire, LOL I'm lost for words...love your poem :-)
thank you Vinaya I always love your pictures :)
thank you Katrine :) I just wrote my feelings about a very beautiful person I love so much
*Melting now reading this..*
I want you melt in my lips..
Oh Fehl...... that is so yummy... Heh... :)
cant get enough of you Darling :)
Oh wow. This is steamy,sexy and sensational. I love the way the words flow with feelings. Awesome!
Thank you Docmo. It's a steamy sexy time lol
HOT HOT HOT! I love it how you constructed the poem, alluring and captivating HOT HOT HOT!
One more reason why I put the blue beach there hehehe
Thank you Max gosh you are so nice!
Wonderfully sensual and erotic! Max said it, "Hot!"
Oh, wow this is sensual. . . and I'm not just talking about the poem here, lol!
xstatic thanks for the hot comments :)
Oh wow yes I am blushing now.. lol Thanks SanneL :)
Intense fire hot sizzling poem!!
Wow, blushing.... yummy... Hehehe...
Flashmakeit glad you like it. Thank you.
Hi, baby! *hugs you in my arms now* heheh
writer20 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago
Wow! I hope you've cool down. Great alive poem. Loved it.
Voted up and beautiful.