Miss Mocha Latte
70there’s this girl
and she looks at me
while she sips her coffee
I could tell
it has cinnamon
sweet caramel kiss
coz I wear her gloss
as I lick my lips
then she rolls
outside the pouring rain
she pulls over my mouth
drinks my mocha latte
I could tell
she wants some more
coz her copper hair
trickles on my pores
she strips me off
like a starry night
hinged back and forth
she is my wolf
I can’t hold back
yes, I can’t hold back
coz no stopping us
her heart pounds
like a cannonball
in rhyme with mine
like a pendulum
I could tell
we’ll swing like this
coz her skin tastes now
like a bubblegum
honeysuckle softness
drips on my skin
then lightning rips
down my spine
I can’t hold back
as thunder volts
along our tongues
yes, I can’t hold back
her secrets dance
as our bodies rock
she wears the crown
and I could tell
why her neck is mine,
how my name is hers,
why her lips are wine,
how our love has burst
there’s this girl
and she looks at me…
as I lick my lips
while you’re reading this
mocha latte and rain…I could tell why her neck is mine, how my name is hers, why her lips are wine, how our love has burst…
About "Miss Mocha Latte"
This poem was written on a chilly rainy night…in between sips of coffee…and in between missing someone…someone who is so special to me in so many ways…and yeah, she wears the crown. It was rainy season in my place and we’ll be together soon. And while I relished my caramel macchiato, she probably was having lunch somewhere and latte too. Hmmm with muffins of course. And here I was writing this poem. At the back of my mind, that has happened too many times. And my Miss Mocha Latte is far more addicting than coffee…
though she was on my tongue but not really…
she has rained on my pores but not really…
she smiled at me but not really…
At first read, this poem may imply a wild love making or a sexy encounter and I blame my strong fantasy about someone that no matter what I write or how I arrange the thing, words just come out like that, so strong, and I have no control as usual. And as usual, every word I used has significance with my life and the person I wrote this for. This is actually about love and longing for someone who is miles away from me. Though she’s not beside me yet, I could taste her kisses at the tip of my tongue. She’s everywhere to me. I’m sure she’s smiling at this very moment reading this.
Though this is ought to be explained well, I still just want to let this out in the open…for people to have this as their own too – to let their minds and hearts paint pictures or share the memories it reminds them of or play the melodies they heard out of it – in the comment box.
Thank you.
© 2011 by Fehl Dungo
Dedicated to Cathy Nerujen
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Cool write... I really got the image of self love here! At first I thought it may be a fantasy of another person and then it seemed to be about just the self. I guess that's all we have in the end anyway. :) Loved the rhythm and bounce to this piece.
I'm so glad you loved it Jfay. Thank you :)
Oh my latte! Pbwriterchick you're back! I have missed your beautiful poems. They always have that flavor I can't find anywhere. Please make a hub. :)
Happy to see you. I love what you said there. You have an amazing mind. Thank you. :)
wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Voting you up and awesome.
What a beautiful expressive poem. To feel love for another is wonderful and when they're away, a poem is the best way to feel close. Thank you for sharing your talent..Cheers
Cool write , voted up and aweosme , i love mocha latte , even if it is fattening as hell :) still this was cool :)
I'm so happy you enjoyed it, Writer20 :) Thanks a bunch!
Hi Ruby! What an awesome comment from you. Yeah a poem is always the best way to a lot of things. Thank you for being here. :)
I love mocha latte too and other flavors..So happy to see you Jami :) Cheers!
I think I saw this girl while drinking ice mocha couple of hours ago in a coffee parlor. I did not relate her with myself as I do now with your wonderful words.
oh wow was she sexy? lol thank you so much for your sweet comment Vinaya :)
Fabulous poem, so vivid and expressive.
voting up, best wishes MM
Hot,interesting and an intimately very expressive peak into desire Fehl...
Beautiful and strong sexy poem. The picture fitted it well too. You are rock, Blaise. ^^
Hi Fehl. Oh wow, this is just so amazing. reading your words makes me feel light-headed. I am smiling so much reading your beautiful and powerful words. There is so much beautiful honesty and I love the way you capture every nuance of longing and desire. Gosh, you wrote this for me. I am the luckiest girl in the world. :)
I want to hug you like crazy now...
Mwaaaaaaaaaaahh. Thank you, Fehl for your sweet gorgeous poem. You write so vividly and turn on my heart light. Mocha latte will never be the same again. Heh. :) XOXOXOX
I loved this. Amazing fehl! "there’s this girl
and she looks at me
while she sips her coffee..."
Its like one of those moments where you are sitting in a cafe and this gorgeous person from across the room makes eye contact with you and then you fall into a fantasy of the 2 of you, your imagination going wild :x and then you pop back into reality (and maybe she walks over to you and all that you dreamed comes true) or she gets up and leaves and you'll never know what could have been. thats what this made me think of. but either way for a brief moment perhaps yall shared that same fantasy...simply beautiful and sensual :)
Thank you MM :) you are fabulous.
Hi Prof A. You put all the fantastic comments in one sentence :) Thank you.
Hi Freya. Thank you. I love that pic though I’ve altered the original a bit coz it was pure rain and water. Now, it’s mocha and rain splattered. :)
Hi Cathy. I can’t ask for more coz you love it. That makes me ahh luckier than the luckiest girl in the world. :p Mwah! (hugs you like crazy now..)
Hi Nikki. Yup kinda one of those moments..We definitely were classmates on that sexy class lol Our imagination are awesome. :)
This sounded so sexy. I love your explanation at the end. Lovely. :)
Thank you so much Kryptonyt. It was my first time to put an explanation to a poem I published. I usually just let them be... :)
Miss Mocha Latte! Wow the name just rocks, Fehl! This is amazing and so beautiful, by far the best you have written yet and the boldest too! Your star is rising here! Wow....
Let me count the ways that I dig this! I can so relate to so much of it!... :) XOXOXOXOX
ssssshhh she's still asleep.. lol Thank you, honey. Let me hear you as you count the ways..hehehe XOXOXO
Hah! That is so funny! She is so cute hugging that pillow! :)
I am her pillow..I am hugged so much lol
Heeee! That is so sexy! :)
sexy like the photo above :)
Hehehe. So is this pillow talk? LOL. I am sipping coffee as I read this Mocha Latte again. I love when you write sexy hubs about me, Fehl. :) Mwaaaaahhh. XOXOX
I am sipping coffee as I pillow-talk with her LOL So is that a pillow talk? Heheheh My hubs are so sexy these days. What does it says bout us? :) Mwaaahhh!
Oh Fehl, what does it say... your sexy hubs are getting um... more intense. I love these lines about lips and tasting coffee and lip gloss...
I wish I was sipping that coffee with you, Fehl. Your hubs these days are so beautiful... And from "Fallen Angel" to "Stargazer", to "Friday night of blaze" ... to "The One - ..." Oh Fehl, your hubs and your writing just hums with electricity and love...
You are the Sweetest Girl Ever. Mwaaaaahh. I love you, baby. You make me so very happy. :) My sweet adorable loving Fehl. XOXOXO
My hubs are just mild..not so intense (tease) LOL Mwah! Um lips, coffee and lip gloss-you're the only one who really knows the meaning beyond these words :)
IRBSYRN than coffee. :) I hate it when I can't say some words in here. LOL My hubs are in sync with yours. From Halfway Space to your recent.. I love them so much and I love you much. Mwaaaaahhh. XOXOXOXO
It is nice when you say this. I know the meaning...I know the feeling too... :)
Sometimes you don't have to say it... it still feels the same, when it's you, Fehl. And I love what Nikki and Cassy said too. :)
If only people knew how sweet and gorgeous you really are.... heh. Yes, we're in sync. Some new things coming from me soon, baby. :) I love you always and ever. Mwaaaaaaaahhh. Have a peaceful day, Fehl.
Marcial is in my prayers too. You are in my thoughts. XOXOXOXO
No one can write like you do , blaise.
You often leave me speechless as now...
Take care.
Dim x
Stirred my imagination for sure. Incredible wording, great creativity on this one. Very sensual, beneath the meaning you intended. Amazing stuff
Oh baby, I love your new poem so much. Mwah! I love you. Thank you for everything and for the prayers bout my grandpa..You are always in my thoughts, too. XOXOXO
Hi, my dear Dim! Your comments always leave me speechless. Thank you. You’re one of my besties here. XOXO
Hi Ben! What fantastic things you said here! Thank you. I am a real fan of your creative works. Your hubs are awesome!
I need to sip coffee after reading that. LOL
or maybe a cold shower.
oh wow, Dark Heart I have missed you. How are you? I'm so happy to see you here. :) You are amazing.
Wow I really enjoyed that. As I've already said you're so incredibly deep and I just love your work.
I really grateful for your Hub posts. Have a happy Christmas.
Happy Holidays Lionel :) Thank you so much for being a usual reader. Means a lot. xoxo
Y'know I have just started reading poetry Hubs and I am really liking them!
Amazing job!
If you're looking for the best poetry hubs, read the hubs of each person who commented here :) Thank you Sab! Have a great day :)
I just sneaked back again to have a quick sip of that sweet Latte. LOL. I get goose pimples reading this beautiful hub, Fehl. Have a sweet day, honey. Mwaaaah. XOXOXOX :)
you know what happens when I catch you sneaking.. :p Mwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
.. love the title and the seductive words which follow - sure hope my buddy Johnny J-spot gets to read this .
After I read MISS MOCHA LATTE I stayed all night in that cafe hoping something like this would happen to me - I'm still waiting - lol - so I will post MISS MOCHA LATTE (I like saying it) to my Facebook page with a direct link back here and your big beautiful talented heart
lake erie time ontario canada 5:49pm
Aw thank you Colin :) Who's Johnny J? LOL
Oh your Miss Mocha Latte will arrive soon.
I don't know why but this read out to the beat of "Miss Independent" in my head. I really like the edge on this. Bravo!
Oh wow, I like that song from Neyo. Some more of his songs actually. hehe Well then that's a lovely beat so sexy and and so Miss Independent.. :) Glad you loved this. Thank you.
......mocha latte ooooh la la - oh how I miss you
lake erie timeless for you
I miss you too my friend. How are you? I hope you are having a fantastic and happy time. :)
.....I need to - I got to - post this beauty once again on my marquee at my FB home page with a direct link back here and to your heart - please come by our FB group LET'S JUST TALK MUSIC OR CINEMA ......and post a favorite video or a favorite scene from a film - I would love that ..... lake erie time 12:54am sending you warm wishes and good energy
Wow, this hub just rocks every way you read it! Okay, the way I read it anyway! LOL! :)
Pure Magic-ness, Fehl! Master Poetess! :)
How can I thank you for saying that? :D
jfay2011 6 months ago
Very lovely poem. Mocha latte fantasies sound vivid.