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"Their plan had been very simple: to stay together for the rest of their lives; a plan that anyone within their circle would agree was accomplishable. They were best friends, lovers, and soul mates, destined to be together, everyone thought. But as it happened, one day destiny greedily changed its mind…"
“I waited, and waited. And he waited, too, though I didn’t know what he was waiting for. It felt like I was the only one reaching out. But he was always there. Watching me, watching him. Never any closer to me, but never any farther away, either.”
"I feel like a jig-saw puzzle missing a piece and I’m not even sure what the picture should be."
And when you came into my life, I didn’t care about the picture…although you were puzzling me in some ways. Because…
“You are the distance between the ways things are and the way I want them to be…
Time and distance are what daring me. I feel you are so closer yet so far away…Like the millions of stars I was gazing up the night you sat there beside me. In the middle of strange silence, you’ve broken up my dream saying…
“Don’t wake me cause I’m dreaming of angels on the moon
You can tell me about your thoughts,
About the stars that fill polluted skies
And show me where you run to,
When no one’s left to take your side.”
I couldn’t say a thing. No words for what I feel. Perhaps I know you know what my heart is.
“Cause I could see your heart. You held it out before you for everyone to see, and I worried that it would be bruised or torn. And more than anything in my life I wanted to keep it safe, to warm it with my own."
Photo Credit: Patrick Hoesly's flickr photostream
Quoted lines were from:
Cecelia Ahern, PS I Love You
Maggie Stiefvater, Shiver
Dexter
I Wrote this for You
Angels on the Moon, Thriving Ivory
Buffy the Vampire Slayer
That's what happens when a quote-lover is bored. :)
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As a creative writing piece the cosmic distance of emotion is defined idealisticaly and with insight that possibly only a woman can reveal;)
Still it was touching!
Aaah! You are so lovely, blaise.x
Sandyspider, thank you :)
Professor Acer, always interesting to hear your insights :)
Thanks leebertea :)
So are you. Thanks so much Dim. :)
Very nice blaise25 my friend, love your poems-you are a romantic :)
be good my friend...
Beautiful! You are ablaze Blaise!
To warm a heart with your own,Beautiful.
Cheers
Blaise, this is wonderful. I didn't know till I got to the end that they are well known quotes. Even more embarrassing as I read some of these books, including "P.s. I love You". These are lovely sentiments, and expressed between two people who are usually madly in love with each other. A nice "Lover's Hub" in a way. WOuld love to read more like it. Rating this very much Up! Thanks!
Good to see you Wolf :) These aren't mine, just mashed them up and inserted few lines to form whatever in the moment :) Thanks, Wolf :)
Sweet Micky Dee thank you :)
Always exploring, thanks for popping in. Cheers!
Cheeky Girl hey! haha yeah, I'd like to see reactions like yours ;) I'll make more like it in the coming free time. Thanks for rating up. XX
Blaise, you are not a quote whore. Don't say that. You are a collector of quotes. LOL! Sounds a lot better, and less cheap.
I love the Jigsaw image. We all feel a bit like that at times. These are interesting quotes. And also there are times when - as you say, there are no words for what we feel, when only emotions can say, and they transform beyond words into other things. Which is part of the beauty of love.
Oh, wow. Listen to me. Okay, enough gushing here. (laughing at myself now) Take care, blaise. Always a joy reading your hubs.
XX
Wow that was a truly awesome piece. How creative is that!? Combining all those quotes so brilliantly the way you did. I would've never known. This really impressed me. Haha, can you tell? Great job.
This is a very strong piece.. I liked it a lot!!
Needed another read. Thank you Dear!
Astra Nomik - quote what moi friend?hahaha I've changed it :) You flatter me so much. Thank you. Yup, the puzzle pic is so pretty, like us ;) It's even prettier when you look at it from a distance..Always interesting to hear you. You have a beautiful heart.
hahaha You're always free to speak here Cath, I'll listen. Thank you for reading. TC :)
Kaltopsyd - I dunno how I did lol I just loved those quotes and I'd like to share them all, turned out to be a picture after putting together the pieces. Thank you :)
Thanks for visiting CM :)
Hey Mik, glad you dropped by again :)
Blaise, you are one hubber I would quite like to meet one fine day. Only for my cowardice, I'd tell you why. The comment on the puzzle has me smiling. That is sweet. You are good at reading my mind. *Hugs*
Hi Cathy! Likewise, pleasure to meet Astra, you're a star :) Don't be scared, I don't look scary at all haha jk I'm glad I made you smile. You always read me so well and I'm glad to ponder from the beauty of your views. XX
Great qoutes, I like how putting them all together makes a new story. Kinda like when changing channels quickly on TV..... if you take all the words and pretend they go together youget somethign like.."Yesterday, in world news, a man was found hiding in....a new car!! All this could be yours if....Sara left me...." ;)
Beautiful, Blaise. This very well could have been a continuance of "secrets they keep" ;)
awesome piece.. wow..
hope all is rosy with you!
DoorMattnomore Hello! hahaha yea changing channels. You're last sentence is intriguing hmmm? Thanks for being here :)
OMG, Invictus! I missed you my fave poet. I've been checking your page for a new hub but maybe you're in busy mode. Yes, it may be pretty to be the sequel of "Secrets They Keep" but nothing would be perfect if you wrote its next piece ;) Please..please.. :)
I've been sick but back to my feet. Hope all is great with you. Hope to read a new poem :)
I do hope your feeling better
this was brilliantly done with a creative surprise
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thanks
Thanks Lyrics, I'm fine :) Good to see you here
hello there, such a beautiful piece. well done.
Hello Poet L :) Happy to see you here and happy to read you again :) I missed Invictus and Justine, too. Where's Justine76? I can't find her hubs..
I saw this and had to visit this again. I loved reading the comments as well as the hub. I love these quotes... :)
everything of what we're made of, should mash up... :) mwaaaaahh!
I love the comments here too... :)
Sandyspider Level 1 Commenter 22 months ago
Love the poem.