Less than and Three

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By blaise25


She’s starin at me

I see fireflies in the mornin

Her eyes – a sunset trench

I yawn and she grins

Next thing I know we’re kissin…

Sippin vanilla

Blueberry muffins


Cheesecake and coffee

Sand castles, paper cranes

There she goes again…


She’s drivin with me

I see the angels in despair

Her hand – brushin my hair

I breathe a tingle

Next thing I know we’re in red lights…

Sippin vanilla

Blueberry muffins

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Frappe and cookies

Sand castles, paper cranes

There she goes again…


Stargazin with me

Never had a dream come true

Her love – my Milky Way

I fell, we collide

Next thing I know we’re in Halfway Space…

Sippin vanilla

Blueberry muffins


Less than and three

Sand castles, paper cranes

There she goes again…



To Cathy Nerujen...I wrote this for you.


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kirutaye profile image

kirutaye 11 months ago

A cool poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 11 months ago

This poem is worth than Sixpence None The Richer,;)

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W.R. Shinn Level 1 Commenter 11 months ago

It must be love and adoration, all the way. Cool!

W.

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 11 months ago

Message received and very understood and so amazing, Fehl. Wow I am reading this 10 times now... LOL. Love you so much.

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 11 months ago

Vanilla and blueberry muffins...milky way...halfway space (vaguely familiar, Fehl...hehe...)...what a gastronomic treat your beautufehl poem is .... I am in heaven...and smiling...and the driving dream...oh wow...there it is....

Fehl, you are totally awesome and more....this is very special...just like you.... :)

And I am so loving the title too.

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 11 months ago

This has to be a special memory for you. It's lovely. Thank you.

Cheers

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blaise25 Hub Author 11 months ago

Oh thanks for dropping by Kirutaye. Happy to be checkin your hubs. :)

Hi Prof. A! Really? Wow you got hugs for that *hugs* :) I like "Kiss Me" more than "There She goes Again.."

Yes, it's love and adoration all the way..Thank you WR Shinn :)

Hi Cathy! I'm so smiling now. ^,^ You're smart I know you'll get it though the words are vaguely familiar hehe. Wow, you read it 10 times? You must have memorized it by now, babe. Mwah. I love you.

Thanks AE! It is. :) Glad you loved this.

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Nikkij504gurl Level 6 Commenter 11 months ago

Is this by any chance for Cathy? I caught the halfway space refrence. That is really beautiful. there she goes again. reminds me of a song...

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 11 months ago

Wow this makes total sense now, especially as I have read Cathy's comments too! Up and awesome too!

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Cheeky Girl Level 4 Commenter 11 months ago

Oh wow, This is so amazing! Cathy told me this was published. Fehl, you are trailblazing with this very beautiful hub! And Ruby is right, special memory and a lot more are behind it, because Cathy has a damn big grin on her face when she reads this! Heh! I love the title! You write the "Less than" and "three" characters to create on Facebook the Love Heart sign.

Fehl, you have surpassed your sexy and romantic self! And the Halfway Space poem by Cathy is so nicely included.

Aaww, I am so smiling right now. :) Rating up Fehl! You are swesome, hun! XOXO

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lionel1 Level 1 Commenter 11 months ago

blaise25, thank you so much for that beautiful poem I really enjoyed it very much, and I'm already looking forward to your next one.

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blaise25 Hub Author 11 months ago

@Nikki - Hi! Your memory is brilliant. Yup, it is for Astra. Happy you loved this. :)

@Acaetnna - Hello there my friend! Oh wow what can I say, I guess it's too obvious now LOL You're awesome! Thank you so much.

@Cassy - Hi Curly! (grins like crazy at you) I'm happy you like this Cass. 'Less than and three' has another meaning..Ask Cathy bout it. ;) Mwah! But then, you're smart, I think your curly power knows it already. hehe Thank you. XO

@Lionel - Hello there! Your usual visits and comments are amazing. I love you for that. Thank you, Lion! :)

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 11 months ago

Yep, Cassy know it's meaning, Fehl. Thank you for dedicating this to me. Oooh, I am so happy. Mwa mwaaah. LOL. It is the beautiful thoughts and feelings that go into such a sweet poem like this that I love so much...and the person who writes these words as well... ^_^

"...slippin vanilla...." Heh. :D

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blaise25 Hub Author 11 months ago

Mwah back! I love hot blueberry muffins right now.. :D

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 11 months ago

Muffinnnnnzzzzzzzzz..... ^_^

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epigramman 11 months ago

..you are a very sensuous and seductive writer - and that is something which cannot be taught in any school .... unless the headmistress in that school is

Blaise 25 - and in that case I want to be sitting in the front row .......with a blueberry muffin ......

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blaise25 Hub Author 11 months ago

I used to cut classes..lol And blueberry muffins are more than inspiration :) Thank you so much epi!

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Dim Flaxenwick Level 7 Commenter 11 months ago

Oh blaise , there´s nothing l can say that can express how this poem makes me feel. As do so many of your wonderful poems.

Thank you for sharing.

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blaise25 Hub Author 10 months ago

Oh thank you so much Dim. :) Just seeing you here with other friends and amazing writers mean so much to me. You're always inspiring. XO

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manthy Level 4 Commenter 7 months ago

Very unique poem - I like your writing style, very creative, voted up and awesome

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blaise25 Hub Author 7 months ago

Thanks for liking my style and voting up :) Perhaps you could play it in your guitar hehe

BeyondMax profile image

BeyondMax Level 5 Commenter 4 weeks ago

Sweet, sweet, sweet and oh, so loving! =)

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blaise25 Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Thank you Max! You are so sweet

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 4 weeks ago

Wow what a beautiful seductive poem. Simply awesome.

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blaise25 Hub Author 4 weeks ago

thank you my friend :)

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