Fallen Angel
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On page five, she’s on
On the cover
Back and forth
In between words…
My head was spinning
I’ve been saying her name..
Rolled up my sleeves
I’m in love with you
I told her
The angel smiled and kissed me
It was wrong
But felt a million right
Night sky stars
filled our blanket of kisses
I knew heaven will take her…
I love you
to the moon and back
She told me
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In an instant she’s gone
Suddenly I’m back to
where I started…
Chasing fireflies at 9 am
On a corner
she stood
In between hi and hello
I already gave all
my secrets away
All locked up
I’m fallin’ again
either I fall…
The angel embraced me
We gulped the night
The sweetest kind of wrong
Cupid aligned the stars
Heaven won’t be heaven
without her by my side
I love you, Fehl
Says the soft voice
in the airwaves…
Suddenly I’m closer to
where I started…
I'm chasing after you...
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Copyright © 2011 by Fehl Dungo All Rights Reserved
Bold texts taken from my fave, Hanging by a Moment (by Lifehouse)
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A million right indeed....
I so enjoyed this.. had to read it several times..
I love writing about love Blaise', and you my dear friend are helping to show me the way...
No wonder you're loved so much...I feel myself sliding as well...hah.....you're amazing..!!!
Great poem!
Ok Fehl:
All locked up
I’m fallin’ again
either I fall…
I'm going to get my keys and open this gate,but the next time I see you on the cloud way speeding with your hyper-wings I'm gonna lock you up in this feathered cell writing poems for Guardian Angel Mentalist acer until you fill another book...now get going.;)
Great verses and word usage!!
bella
You're an Angel, and your words are beautiful.
Smiles
awww this is so beautiful, it paints a lovely picture, a midsummer nights dream, breaking into dawn, chasing fireflies and halos.
Fehl, I love this new hub. Magical and mystical and so amazing as always. Angels have such an effect on us. We can become so attracted to Angels... and we love them so much. I loved these lines "The sweetest kind of wrong..." and this:
"Cupid aligned the stars
Heaven won’t be heaven
without her by my side..."
So beautiful. I am so loving your writing these days. :) I think I figured out the page 5 thing too. LOL. Mwah. I love romantic poetry.
Thanks Two Poles! God you’re awesome :)
Hello bbRed! Can I call you bbRed? lol Glad you loved this one. Thank you. I love writing bout love, too. It’s the main spice in our writings. Sliding..um take care of the Ferrari please hehe
Thirtyone, thanks man!
Hi Prof A! lol ok my Guardian, I’m gonna think bout the next book..I wonder, are you published? Thank you so much. You always impress me. XO
Wow, I’m so happy to see you here Bella. You’re amazing. Thank you so much. :)
Hi, Ruby! Thank you for the beautiful words. Your comments are always inspiring. :)
Hi, Nikki! Aw that’s magical..midsummer nights dream, breaking into dawn, chasing fireflies and halos, wow! Your mood is set..Get your pen and write bout that beautiful imagery :) You’re damn creative! Thanks so much, my friend. Always happy to see you around. XO
Hi Cathy! *smiles at you* So glad you loved this. I love your comment here..You always get me, babe. Hmmm what about the page 5 thing? Not sure if I’m thinking what you’re thinking.. :D Email me. Mwah.
bbred's ferrari turns shades of black, "to the moon and back"....sliding deeper...angel's draw knack...love as everything...dreamers turned back...held in a vision so grand where...
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"The angel embraced me...We gulped the night...The sweetest kind of wrong"....
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"Suddenly I’m closer to....where I started…"
Your words guide bbred's flight through love and it fits like a glove...
Your poems are so deep and so wonderful, I love your poems. Thank you for another amazing post.
hey hey bbRed! I love the black Ferrari than the red. They say red cars are prone to accidents. But whatever. lol Pretty imagery..black Ferrari zoooming to the moon and back..waking up sexy angels.. O, there I saw you with one my friend. lol
You're closer to where you started? Mmmm? lol
Glad that my words guide you like a GPS hehe
Cheers! Happy to see you, bb! Have you done the medieval hub?
Hello Lionel! I appreciate your usual visits. Thanks so much for always reading. I'm so happy you love my poems. I'm back writing again.. Thanks! you're awesome! XO
on it as we speak...love this stuff ... wAy cool!!!
only blaise' gps can guide my black ferrari from the moon in medieval times..
Yay! I already rated your medieval hub awesome and beautiful hehe
Wow, I'm honored. :) Blaise GPS can play music, too. lol Song above now playing..
blaise... done it again... shame on you for reaching our souls...and hearts.
thought you forgot bout me...
ok, shame on me...lol
so happy to see you whenever I'm back XO
been keepin a low profile ;) But can't help but comment when I am around.
Since you're around now, can I request some poetry pleaze? :)
This is a standout hub and what a lovely warmth that bursts out from it. Your love Poetry is always beautiful and so impressive, and told with your wonderful soft lilting and easy-flowing style that I love so much. Wow! Feh, you are just more and more amazing to me these days! Honestly! You're the Greatest! :) XOXO
Left a little something by way of poetry out on my front step...if ya pass by...take a lookie-loo.
*blushes* Hello Hermes..Peach muffin! Thank you. I'm so happy you loved this one. You've been so amazing since the beginning! Mwah! Me the greatest? Thanks. I'm not. :)
Hi Enigmatic! Oh wow I'm gonna go take a look :)
Hehehe. "Hermes"? LOL. That is so cool, Fehl. You are typical...deflect the attention away from yourself. LOL. Fehl, you are very awesome and amazing. Mwah.
Hermes..the messenger of the gods.. ^,^
Yes, did someone mention Hermes? I got a message... LOL! Okay it was gmail, I'm following the hub! Heh! Peach Muffin! I love this! I wish Cathy would call me that! ROFL! Love that! ^,^
She's my blueberry..you're my peach.. :) Well since you're like Peachy (from moi Stargazer) *winks*
Blaise I loved the way you played with numbers in this. And this stanza rocked:
"Chasing fireflies at 9 am
On a corner
she stood
In between hi and hello
I already gave all
my secrets away"
Aw thanks a lot Randy :) You always rock! Mwah!
Muffins, peaches...pancakes...I'm hungry...let's eat in Starbucks. ^_^
Last Harry Potter tonight. Let's rock the movie house hun mMmm.. ^,^
Harry Potter last night. I haven't seen it - we're seeing this weekend. I'd love rocking the movie house...Heh. ^_^
I loved the Deathly Hallows Part 2. It's loveful and there were kisses..I didn't need Minka (my owl) I needed an elf to bring my baby there so I could chase my own horcruxes...^_^ Oh gosh, I missed you!
Oh wow, we are going this evening to see Harry, Ron and Hermione. This is my movie of the year for me. I am such a huge fan. I am going to re-read the books all over again. Oh I need an owl and a name for him or her. Heh. (Wishes I could use the fireplace flu system for instant travel local cinema, you and I could watch together. I could bring the popped popcorn and drinks...and muffins. LOL.)
I miss you too baby. Mwah. ^_^
SHHHHHH, some of us have to wait til Tuesday to see it.... no spoilers... ;)
Likewise. Oh yeah would be cool to disappear in the fireplace and be in London in a sec. My crazy horcruxes I'm gonna tell you in the email.. Mwah! (Minka says hi to you and Curly)
Hi EM! haha You're gonna love it. I'm gonna shut up now lol :)
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS POEM, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING IT WITH OUR GROUP, HOTEP>PEACE!
Harry Potter was great, Fehl! Sad that there'll be no more after this. We are going to re-watch all the films all over again. Cathy's popping the popcorn! LOL!
Hi KR! Thank you. What's happening with FB's poet society? Gonna be changed to a new group?
Hi Peach Muffin! Yup, it's sad. I dont wanna think bout it. Oh I wish I was watching with you guys.. :c Cathy popping the popcorn yeah? LOL It's gonna be a movie er..marathon. :) Save the couch for me pleaze.. ^,^
Aw cheer up, J.K. Rowling will be adding some things to the Pottermore website. Who knows what she will do next? It's rumored to be a possible Detective story of some kind...!
Yup, we got the popcorn and drinks! Ya got some Pizza too? Have a seat in the middle! Heh! Movie marathon...h'mm...yes....that too! ^,^
Yup Pottermore is a brilliant idea :) Sounds like a game and a website of all Harry Potter stuff..
Yup, I've got some hot pizza :) (Fehl hops in the middle..arm on Cathy, the other on Cassy..) So, are we gonna start the Sorcerer's stone or jump to the Hallows? ^,^
Oh Fehl, we will start and just get stuck in. This is awesome. Heh. ^,^
Now I'm seeing things in 3D... ^,^
This is awesome! Where's is Curly? LOL
Curly is right here. Can't wait to read the interview, Fehl! ^_^
Yay, we're complete now. :)
All through the years the heart beats and pumps blood and then one fine day it discovers it has more purpose than just pumping blood.
It brings you close to your life source and helps you on the journey to find your soul mate.
Oh I almost forgot it pumps blood coz when I met my soul mate, it's been pumping honey... :)
Thanks for reading. Your works are awesome.
Beautifully crafted , thanks for sharing , voted up
Thanks a lot Jami :)
Fantástico~
thanks Awful P :)
blaise . . .AM--AZ-ING HUB! Caught my heart and kept it. LOVED is not adequate to describe how I really feel right now about this....so please accept, GREAT, DEEP, MOVING, TOUCHING only a few adjectives to describe your talent. Peace and I will look for you later on hubs.
Oh wow thanks so much Kenneth :) So happy my hub is so loved :) Thank you. xx
Oh wow, great work - I loved it!
Always happy to see you Acaetnna. Your poems are so romantic :)
You write so well. You seem to put your whole being into your poetry.
Yup I seem to be putting too much of what's in me maybe that's why it turns up so well :) Thank you lovely Dim xx
Enjoyed the poem, it's Awesome. Keep it up.
Best Wishes,
Kamalesh
Thank you so much for the awesome wishes. :)
That was one of the best poems I have ever read! Your storytelling skills are remarkable!
OMG you got hugs for saying that :) Thank you Phoebe. Hope you read my other stuffs. See you around
"Gulped the night and it was the sweetest kind of wrong" WoW! That line define a lot of this piece for me, put every other line together beautifully. Like a kiss in darkness this poem finds its reader... raw and perfect, the sweetest kind of wrong...
omigosh like a kiss in the darkness..that's so sexy! Raw and perfect, that is you, too Marina :)thank you so much.
Gorgeous poem very unique style :) Love your writing. It kind of has a haunting beauty to it.
Thank you for the gorgeous comments Caroline :) Haunting is a very nice word
Your choice of words always so flawless. Hard to not admire your ability in creating tense inside your sweet love scene. Bravo, Blaise!
Aww thank you Freya. I'm so happy to receive compliments especially from a great poet like you :)
What a unique style, keeps me on the sensual edge till the last line, wow, beautiful!
Two Poles 11 months ago
Very beautiful