FLAsh
62You’re ticking all round my clock
I’m in circles of your love
I feel you in
Baby the distance is killing me
And I suffocate
in the air that I breathe
You’re in every particle of mist
Try to detach myself
but you bring me back to life
Resuscitate me with your kiss
I’m stupid
I know you hate me
I’m too dense
I know you love me
You’re a vapor I wanna sigh
My cigar when I chill numb
I paint you in
But sometimes I forget your smile
And I cry a hundred
when I can’t touch your hand
You’re in every song and sound
Try not to miss yourself
But you’re underneath my skin
My spine has memorized you babe
I’m stupid
I know you hate me
I’m too dense
I know you love me
I get closer when I run away
I inhale you when I moan
My heart’s screaming when I don’t speak
I’m scared I couldn’t let you go
I don’t just love you
Too deep now
to never get drowned…
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AHhh,the confusion of love is a stupifying phenomena,lol,you put that to text beautifuly,Blaise.;)
Wow - I totally loved this.
Wow,so different,yet very intriguing.I liked it.
Wow! Its not only different but interesting. I liked it.
Oh to be close yet so far, to be the one but not yet "taken", and to know and yet be unsure. That is torture, and the best thing to do is not fall off that tightrope, Fehl. You really love this person, and the indecision is tough. Your poetry is always frank and honest. You never cease to amaze me with your brilliant way of putting things, cos no matter how confused you are, it somehow makes sense reading it. Deep is the word here - you are in so deep. Great poetry. :) XO
Thank you for always reading my works Dim :) You're just so lovely and amazing. XX
Hi Prof A! I admire your special words :) Thanks a lot! XX
Acaetna, always exploring and Katrinasui thank you guys!
Hello Cathy! My lyrics just like any could convey so much meanings and it's so interesting to hear your views and interpretations.. Yea I love this person and I was going through a lot when I wrote this. But it wasn't torture at all. I was profoundly happy. And sometimes being profoundly happy is scary. Oh I'm weird am I? Well I don't care really. It's me. And it's my song and I'm in love.
and yeah I'm in deep :) XO
Aw, Fehl, this is a great poem, you write so fluidly as always. I am intrigued by how being happy is scary. Yes, sometimes we can be afraid it might shatter or be more fragile than we think - but I believe we feel the fear and love anyway. We should be never afraid to love or open our hearts. I love the honesty here too. That is your trademark, Fehl. Great writing as always. Cheers! have a great day! :) XO
so different but I love this. I like when I can relate to writing and I definitly relate to this. Something so far yet so out of reach....sigh....your great
Excellent, respect is due. I really enjoyed that, thank.
Hi Cassy! Lovely hat :) Very well said moi friend. I agree. Trademark huh LOL Thanks a lot! Cheers and happy holidays!
Amy Taylor hi! Thank you. Looking forward to read your hubs.
Hi Lionel! Oh thanks for the great words :)
Beautiful and I love this very much. You made my day so colorful with this poem. Thanks for share with us. I give my vote to you. Cheers.......
Blessing and hugs,
Beautiful love here Blaise! God bless you dear Blaise! Be safe and warm!
F(ehl)L(oves)Ash.. :)
We're the only two people that understood that from the beginning.. I love you too baby :) x
the title says it all :)
xo
damn this is awesome
thanks for following me and commenting :]
this poem/song creates an odd feeling , not really sure what, but it's powerful
thanks
Thank you Ben. Perhaps it would be more powerful if it was put into real music/song :)
You are such a soulful seeker I smile quietly at your 'in public' search.
Really Amazing. I loved every bit. Lord knows I've felt that way many times.
@Enigmatic - Thank you. Always happy to see you and your meaningful comments. :)
@Nikki - Hopes what you felt was awesomely good LOL Thank you Nikki :)
What an amazing imagery, wow, takes my breath away! Fehl, it's a wonderful raw heartfelt poem!
Oh one of those moments.. I'm glad this took your breath away. I'm so happy today reading your beautiful comments. They inspire me to write more :)
Dim Flaxenwick Level 7 Commenter 17 months ago
Wow. Sometimes you manage to pull something even MORE special out of the hat than ususal.... Thank you for that wonderful poem. Take care. x